tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post1068077819936648957..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: O.S.I.: BordersThe Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-19607450037502412432011-05-05T10:06:42.246-04:002011-05-05T10:06:42.246-04:00Your septolet intirgues me- I need to find out mor...Your septolet intirgues me- I need to find out more.... The line "Crossing<br />The equator<br />Of the heart" is gorgeous!!! Thanks for sharing with us!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-61414784234566251972011-05-05T04:07:25.206-04:002011-05-05T04:07:25.206-04:00Rightly said...
Beautifully written...
gr8!Rightly said...<br />Beautifully written...<br />gr8!PremIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06908406692117909566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-31263028094394822282011-05-04T13:50:14.554-04:002011-05-04T13:50:14.554-04:00this moved with eloquence...thank youthis moved with eloquence...thank youseptembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-61422975810649583462011-05-04T10:40:06.226-04:002011-05-04T10:40:06.226-04:00love your definition of freedom. great poemlove your definition of freedom. great poemIsabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-80844508647509122502011-05-04T00:07:05.573-04:002011-05-04T00:07:05.573-04:00great job with this form ... and wonderful take on...great job with this form ... and wonderful take on border :)<br /><br />peace,<br /><a href="http://www.janepoet.com/" rel="nofollow">JanePoet~deborah</a>Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16124633722778968701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-79210465265984659492011-05-03T17:46:54.996-04:002011-05-03T17:46:54.996-04:00Life feels 'so simple' after reading you. ...Life feels 'so simple' after reading you. Thank you. Please have a good Wednesday.<br /><br /><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-15187695556662258822011-05-03T17:33:25.009-04:002011-05-03T17:33:25.009-04:00I love this form !!
And you used it well .. :)I love this form !!<br />And you used it well .. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-51261140070032583532011-05-03T02:36:07.008-04:002011-05-03T02:36:07.008-04:00This was so well done..I like how you wove the end...This was so well done..I like how you wove the ending two stanzas.<br />There were some interesting reviews, but I liked this- "It's only in this expressing of gratitude for the life we already have, we discover the life we've always wanted"<br />Thanks for your encouragement.. though I working on getting some needed gardening done outside, I've hit a low point with the blogging. So I'm sort of trying to reflect and stand back..figure out what the heck I'm doing (ha ha). I appreciate you!Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-62286324481240351792011-05-03T01:04:41.408-04:002011-05-03T01:04:41.408-04:00Amazing! You are always up for the challenge,
such...Amazing! You are always up for the challenge,<br />such a gentle, quiet person living the full<br />life and showing us how... CROSS OVER!workervnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-58336505306957945912011-05-02T21:58:34.208-04:002011-05-02T21:58:34.208-04:00I like your definition of conscience!I like your definition of conscience!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-27964306328764950082011-05-02T21:53:20.287-04:002011-05-02T21:53:20.287-04:00W.G, I like this! Living the full life is crossin...W.G, I like this! Living the full life is crossing the equator of the heart. Let your conscience be your guide.<br /><br />I like your septolet form. Some of these different forms are hard. This one looks fun but a little tricky in getting the right fourteen words that mirrow each other.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com