tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post1217102094513236604..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: CocoonThe Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-92215609823198646672009-10-20T02:19:44.322-04:002009-10-20T02:19:44.322-04:00Lovely! Beautifully described!Lovely! Beautifully described!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-66555952205825717172009-10-20T02:08:39.270-04:002009-10-20T02:08:39.270-04:00awwww....how the grass is always greener on the ot...awwww....how the grass is always greener on the other side, lying there in a shell of protection from the cold, bitter storms (all exterior, of course)Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-34253990648791500962009-10-19T12:30:35.802-04:002009-10-19T12:30:35.802-04:00Great opening to this poem. Often the right openi...Great opening to this poem. Often the right opening carries the power and feeling of the poem right to the end. Bravo!septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-57538570363926563552009-10-19T05:51:46.041-04:002009-10-19T05:51:46.041-04:00the butterfly coming out from the cocoon.. loved i...the butterfly coming out from the cocoon.. loved it! good one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-84584503693187763512009-10-18T22:45:02.634-04:002009-10-18T22:45:02.634-04:00I love the transformative nature of the caterpilla...I love the transformative nature of the caterpillar ... love your take on it.JanePoet ~ JP/debhttp://www.janepoet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com