tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post2181354715139308237..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: RejectionThe Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50373163983400951822009-10-14T11:14:45.633-04:002009-10-14T11:14:45.633-04:00Great as usual! Keep the faith. You have more than...Great as usual! Keep the faith. You have more than what it takes. "Never ever ever...give in."<br />(Winston Churchill) Peace and love to you this day, lovely poet.Judith Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593319882150923231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-3335433376714969282009-10-13T16:00:00.543-04:002009-10-13T16:00:00.543-04:00This is excellent! I am surprised that it was reje...This is excellent! I am surprised that it was rejected. Still, hang in there! Unless you taste rejection or failure, you will not learn how to appreciate acceptance or victory.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-598963293199912152009-10-13T14:34:30.230-04:002009-10-13T14:34:30.230-04:00Time exhales eternal winds....:)..lovd this a lot ...Time exhales eternal winds....:)..lovd this a lot dear:)...great work:)...Yellow Tuliphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01976804180920335379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-7664315514806327972009-10-13T11:39:45.500-04:002009-10-13T11:39:45.500-04:00I loved the line about roads and alleys....beautif...I loved the line about roads and alleys....beautiful images!!!Saadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06330931132103830002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-77400700778289858792009-10-13T08:51:59.708-04:002009-10-13T08:51:59.708-04:00I second September mom...
this was amazing.. lov...I second September mom... <br /><br />this was amazing.. loved ur wording WG...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-90968091448535046802009-10-12T21:11:26.045-04:002009-10-12T21:11:26.045-04:00You did a terrific job with this one. As always, ...You did a terrific job with this one. As always, I love your use of language. Keep up the good work! You're a winner to us :)septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-4446644930640989642009-10-12T20:48:21.628-04:002009-10-12T20:48:21.628-04:00Some of my favorite lines-
"The gaze of cold ...Some of my favorite lines-<br />"The gaze of cold city folks..<br />The jive of salacious pubs<br />Drunken humor spinning rivers- (awesome)<br />In desolate silence like urchins<br />Time exhales eternal winds"<br />And more..I loved this and had to back up..I took a breath and exhaled! Grin..just a great job you did!Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.com