tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post4008192625322348187..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: The Sower (Pt II)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-26235387437618544782009-03-23T23:05:00.000-04:002009-03-23T23:05:00.000-04:00What a wonderful writer you are. The images and th...What a wonderful writer you are. The images and themes are vivid. Life. Death. Sowing. Reaping. Beautiful. Thank you.Judith Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593319882150923231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-45437530663446903812009-03-22T16:52:00.000-04:002009-03-22T16:52:00.000-04:00What insight! You have captured the brakingdown of...What insight! You have captured the braking<BR/>down of the family, the human family. Regard-<BR/>less, well intentions during separation leaves<BR/>its scares. The struggle, unbelievable all<BR/>have paid the price. Even the land....WOW!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-78696797476220781722009-03-22T06:07:00.000-04:002009-03-22T06:07:00.000-04:00gosh! writer girl, this is a powerful piece,bibica...gosh! writer girl, this is a powerful piece,<BR/>bibical actually...reminds me of pearl buck<BR/>stories, except with a surreal edge - LUVNadegehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04165880447473013492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-24917422244145304522009-03-21T23:45:00.000-04:002009-03-21T23:45:00.000-04:00I couldn't wait for the Pt II. Finally!I MUST say,...I couldn't wait for the Pt II. Finally!<BR/>I MUST say, I was shocked by turn of<BR/>events. I was glued, you described the<BR/>scene so vivid one can almost visualize<BR/>being there....Fascinating!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-79199245252701360802009-03-21T20:29:00.000-04:002009-03-21T20:29:00.000-04:00"The trees skip methodically and bow before him in..."The trees skip methodically and bow before him in the wind" this is beautiful. Your writing is so vivid!!:) Loved it keep going!C Willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15434009424989273556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-76475328776167545162009-03-21T19:21:00.000-04:002009-03-21T19:21:00.000-04:00This is a wonderful story that continues to impres...This is a wonderful story that continues to impress and intrigue the reader. A poetic way of describing the wife. I loved it. Keep going!!septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-25833729288698179692009-03-21T17:00:00.000-04:002009-03-21T17:00:00.000-04:00I just noticed..."Her embrace tugging against his ...I just noticed...<BR/>"Her embrace tugging against his rough body and the liveliness in her dark eyes rising like a night raven in flight..<BR/>The trees skip methodically and bow before him in the wind. He is privy to the royal graces bestowed upon kings." Nice lines -as always-<BR/>I'm enjoying this- hey..don't leave me dry!!<BR/>I posted a reply to your comment..but I wanted to know what those light flurries were?<BR/>Looking forward to more of your writing-Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.com