tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post4896953840486547990..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: Face the Music/ Second Chance (Acrostic)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-81573760913996253412010-06-28T00:04:16.710-04:002010-06-28T00:04:16.710-04:00Love the way you've put these two together int...Love the way you've put these two together into one story... they do fit in together beautifullynandinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389300140570047185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-76125529611262462102010-06-17T13:17:21.755-04:002010-06-17T13:17:21.755-04:00Love pulls one apart, doesn't it? Great piece...Love pulls one apart, doesn't it? Great piece.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50089223851890246002010-06-16T19:47:23.918-04:002010-06-16T19:47:23.918-04:00hey pretty girl, this is lovely. each line
is enri...hey pretty girl, this is lovely. each line<br />is enriched with a feeling of sadness.Nadegehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04165880447473013492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-71666017300705260362010-06-13T21:02:06.929-04:002010-06-13T21:02:06.929-04:00vivid images...
cool words.vivid images...<br />cool words.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-83144974698166224412010-06-10T16:53:23.553-04:002010-06-10T16:53:23.553-04:00The turmoil in any relationship explained well her...The turmoil in any relationship explained well here.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-46206052763148242262010-06-09T10:52:48.812-04:002010-06-09T10:52:48.812-04:00I love how the story ties in both...The ups and do...I love how the story ties in both...The ups and down of relationships and the after...JStarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-20671908737055398612010-06-09T09:38:08.731-04:002010-06-09T09:38:08.731-04:00Very well combined.Nice Acrostic. Well done.Very well combined.Nice Acrostic. Well done.Sarashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09710421804935682833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-42963996279828730042010-06-09T03:51:07.492-04:002010-06-09T03:51:07.492-04:00It is discriptive of a drama- almost like another ...It is discriptive of a drama- almost like another world to me though. <br />You did a nice job with the lines here..and the last sequence- comprehending, holding, adding, nestling- my favorite.<br />Also, thank you so for your sweet comment..really appreciate your thoughts! I deleted the second as they went through. Hope you have wonderful day tomorrow-Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-34754546207011313102010-06-08T22:59:47.797-04:002010-06-08T22:59:47.797-04:00both very nice - well done!both very nice - well done!rdlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04062856086277201874noreply@blogger.com