tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post5638584166557603529..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: Hunger (Haiku Heights)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-72023139923088285612012-09-22T14:36:26.308-04:002012-09-22T14:36:26.308-04:00Glad you're back!
Love your work, the clouds l...Glad you're back!<br />Love your work, the clouds looks<br />like whip cream :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-59787467763738779562012-09-19T14:45:02.901-04:002012-09-19T14:45:02.901-04:00I like kindness in bread.
Very nice :)I like kindness in bread.<br /><br />Very nice :)septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-42430250402249741912012-09-18T19:30:23.540-04:002012-09-18T19:30:23.540-04:00Now that I think about it--a haiku about starvatio...Now that I think about it--a haiku about starvation seems most appropriate in the 3-5-3 form. Enjoyed all your takes :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50762082944600046992012-09-18T18:05:52.044-04:002012-09-18T18:05:52.044-04:00Nice progression here. I think I like the middle o...Nice progression here. I think I like the middle one best - but perhaps I am just hungry....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-22914360095629754602012-09-18T15:17:18.820-04:002012-09-18T15:17:18.820-04:00I love your set. Starts out in despair, but ends ...I love your set. Starts out in despair, but ends beautifully with hunger dying!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14000820772202105961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50810990836827825132012-09-18T14:25:11.007-04:002012-09-18T14:25:11.007-04:00That first one makes me crave for a midnight snack...That first one makes me crave for a midnight snack as I read :)Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-23034292493548267582012-09-18T09:46:17.918-04:002012-09-18T09:46:17.918-04:00The last one does it ... at least to me. Wonderful...The last one does it ... at least to me. Wonderful set of haiku. Welcome back.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-46648269231970677382012-09-18T09:24:02.443-04:002012-09-18T09:24:02.443-04:00The state of being in and out of starvation...
We...The state of being in and out of starvation...<br /><br />Well written..<br /><br />http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/mamma-i-am-starving.htmlLocomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-60996359825351781982012-09-18T09:10:10.365-04:002012-09-18T09:10:10.365-04:00I can't help but wonder if hunger also prays.....I can't help but wonder if hunger also prays...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/09/17/the-onion-pickers/" rel="nofollow"><b>Starve</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-58746889706737322032012-09-18T02:50:28.187-04:002012-09-18T02:50:28.187-04:00The last haiku does speak of a dream we all want t...The last haiku does speak of a dream we all want to see fulfill :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-19315361359566962532012-09-17T21:59:26.613-04:002012-09-17T21:59:26.613-04:00Very nice set on a tough prompt. I especially lik...Very nice set on a tough prompt. I especially like the second one.Barbarahttp://www.barbarathehealthynut.blogspot.com/2012/09/putting-food-by.htmlnoreply@blogger.com