tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post5946776830871248307..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: The Reaper (Pt III)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-27608241427226564912009-04-27T17:31:00.000-04:002009-04-27T17:31:00.000-04:00I like how this is progressing. But he went from n...I like how this is progressing. But he went from not wanting to get up to excitement of seeing the stranger too fast. I wanted to see the through process of him thinking that maybe it was his father. Still, a good read.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-43711903761802449202009-04-27T15:42:00.000-04:002009-04-27T15:42:00.000-04:00this is beautiful and works in itself as a powerfu...this is beautiful and works in itself as a powerful piece of flash fiction. i am the founder and contributing editor of glossolalia. i would love for you to submit this piece (and any others you have). http://glossolaliaflash.blogspot.com/Adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09031370976246712353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50755947783583116472009-04-26T19:14:00.000-04:002009-04-26T19:14:00.000-04:00Interesting! Great details in describing
Kadin's ...Interesting! Great details in describing <br />Kadin's dilemma, now i am wondering where is the sister, and the father? Waiting, waiting, waiting.workervnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-75618775398742017382009-04-26T14:44:00.000-04:002009-04-26T14:44:00.000-04:00I'm getting more hooked with each post!I'm getting more hooked with each post!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-54115635759575580022009-04-26T09:38:00.000-04:002009-04-26T09:38:00.000-04:00Love the sense of waiting at the end. You sketch ...Love the sense of waiting at the end. You sketch out Kadin's feelings and emotions so well in this piece. I like how you are giving glimpses of the mom's concern and despair. Love this story!!septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-63297842631757384252009-04-26T09:36:00.000-04:002009-04-26T09:36:00.000-04:00With great expectation and excitement I wait for p...With great expectation and excitement I wait for part 4!!:) well done - Oh yes I'm hopeful as well.C Willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15434009424989273556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-40139452811575601752009-04-25T22:34:00.000-04:002009-04-25T22:34:00.000-04:00I noticed you just posted this..
Looks like hope a...I noticed you just posted this..<br />Looks like hope and regret? I'm hopeful-Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.com