tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post5992561143465425378..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: Childlike SprintThe Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-63819000853201939012010-03-08T17:29:52.786-05:002010-03-08T17:29:52.786-05:00Great imagery in this piece! This is a huge hit!Great imagery in this piece! This is a huge hit!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-40808874727151029232010-03-08T09:38:09.580-05:002010-03-08T09:38:09.580-05:00The life of a child is intoxicating to watch. Gre...The life of a child is intoxicating to watch. Great poem! Love all the imagery.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-74458012657027950002010-03-07T08:34:43.158-05:002010-03-07T08:34:43.158-05:00Wonderful!! I loved the lines about sprinting acro...Wonderful!! I loved the lines about sprinting across skies and dreamers!!!<br /><br />Cool!!Saadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06330931132103830002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-79588895907201388132010-03-06T21:57:27.041-05:002010-03-06T21:57:27.041-05:00gorgeous - love the way your words play on
my tong...gorgeous - love the way your words play on<br />my tongue & the visual plays upon my mind -<br />talented girl you make words sing.Nadegehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04165880447473013492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-63898712070678054122010-03-06T21:20:28.625-05:002010-03-06T21:20:28.625-05:00I think this was one of your best poems yet. The i...I think this was one of your best poems yet. The imagery was really pleasing and I love the subject matter. Well done!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-81159422689993970262010-03-06T17:58:39.983-05:002010-03-06T17:58:39.983-05:00Childhood! Seemingly a perfect place, where the
we...Childhood! Seemingly a perfect place, where the<br />weak looks strong, where the small looks big and<br />dreams can't wait to come true. And the pages<br />fly in the breeze of time, we grow up, wake up,<br />and take care of the child in side/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-38637973943327323202010-03-06T17:42:14.358-05:002010-03-06T17:42:14.358-05:00Beautiful, so beautiful, "Pages turning in th...Beautiful, so beautiful, "Pages turning in the<br />breeze, so long,long,long age:]workervnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-5116477745493242822010-03-06T17:36:45.579-05:002010-03-06T17:36:45.579-05:00Now, I look at this as a place of refuge and hope-...Now, I look at this as a place of refuge and hope- worries and cares work to bring us there..but certainly one of childlike faith- thanks for sharing your wonder words-Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.com