tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post612911371441875344..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: One Second Of FortuneThe Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-83924515871296996892011-08-13T10:39:43.168-04:002011-08-13T10:39:43.168-04:00Great ending. You develop the scene and character...Great ending. You develop the scene and characters so well. It feels like a scene from a play as your words are so good at describing the action.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-34005472003125293582011-08-12T05:32:28.261-04:002011-08-12T05:32:28.261-04:00Really good story, loved all of the descriptions.Really good story, loved all of the descriptions.Evy_Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05061985872121467616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-50925202792252024792011-08-06T17:50:20.949-04:002011-08-06T17:50:20.949-04:00I enjoyed that; it wasn't what I expected at t...I enjoyed that; it wasn't what I expected at the end :).Eschttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04149262499133880926noreply@blogger.com