tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post6223723492004076006..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: Departed (O.S.I.)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-84939141622412863132009-11-11T21:12:17.210-05:002009-11-11T21:12:17.210-05:00Neglected gardens - perfect depiction of departure...Neglected gardens - perfect depiction of departure. Nice.Jukotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00103565958637835237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-82059694626302889712009-11-11T20:42:08.926-05:002009-11-11T20:42:08.926-05:00On memory's canvas
Distance grows like weeds
I...On memory's canvas<br />Distance grows like weeds<br />In neglected gardens<br /><br />You've captured the shades of departure well.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-80760660061015202912009-11-11T19:37:56.251-05:002009-11-11T19:37:56.251-05:00How absence fills the space it creates....with wee...How absence fills the space it creates....with weeds or good feelings. wow.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-54030256849957732302009-11-11T16:24:15.417-05:002009-11-11T16:24:15.417-05:00Nice imagery here. I especially like "memory...Nice imagery here. I especially like "memory's canvas" and "distance grows like weeds."Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-6797493627335999142009-11-10T23:57:18.072-05:002009-11-10T23:57:18.072-05:00Fantastic! I like it!Fantastic! I like it!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-33204100652298882212009-11-10T15:07:24.017-05:002009-11-10T15:07:24.017-05:00Some beautiful line in this!Some beautiful line in this!when the musics overhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-7521498217481743722009-11-10T14:12:44.080-05:002009-11-10T14:12:44.080-05:00On memory's canvas
Distance grows like weeds
I...<i>On memory's canvas<br />Distance grows like weeds<br />In neglected gardens<br />Midnight ink in glory</i><br /><br />beautifully phrased ..<br /><br />many thanks ..zoya gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-8622617892900774692009-11-10T10:42:43.048-05:002009-11-10T10:42:43.048-05:00Wonderful write. Distance do grow like weeds negle...Wonderful write. Distance do grow like weeds neglected in the garden. So apt a simlie.<br /><br />Enjoyed reading yours.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-24015743081928351312009-11-10T08:43:06.886-05:002009-11-10T08:43:06.886-05:00You keep getting better and better....loved the tw...You keep getting better and better....loved the two lines in the start!Saadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06330931132103830002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-9743819506220485452009-11-10T07:47:30.431-05:002009-11-10T07:47:30.431-05:00I like the way this poem feels. Somebody's in ...I like the way this poem feels. Somebody's in love!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-73682069165427877442009-11-10T03:28:22.017-05:002009-11-10T03:28:22.017-05:00beautiful lines..luvlyy words..:)beautiful lines..luvlyy words..:)Mads...https://www.blogger.com/profile/18396027114150900038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-4848247227607763082009-11-09T23:38:26.656-05:002009-11-09T23:38:26.656-05:00Beautiful imagery!Beautiful imagery!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-33927900987667868902009-11-09T22:54:25.635-05:002009-11-09T22:54:25.635-05:00makes me wonder...is their home the same?? very n...makes me wonder...is their home the same?? very nice writeKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-35859444487844857442009-11-09T21:44:27.359-05:002009-11-09T21:44:27.359-05:00Midnight ink in glory - awesome!
Your talent cont...Midnight ink in glory - awesome!<br /><br />Your talent continues to grow and grow. Wonderful!septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.com