tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post6881559013760889386..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: Chaos (O.S.I)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-46467493717968599142010-01-23T20:16:58.298-05:002010-01-23T20:16:58.298-05:00Echo God Build Hope from Chaos – if you put the la...Echo God Build Hope from Chaos – if you put the last words of your verse together. Amazing images and rhythm to your poem. <br />My heart breaks for the people of Haiti. I pray that they be spared more pain and that we find a way to buoy them in their resilience and comfort them in their loss. Thank you for writing this.gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-42701370130757041902010-01-23T00:03:03.996-05:002010-01-23T00:03:03.996-05:00Strong imagery. Lovely form. Surely a powerful ech...Strong imagery. Lovely form. Surely a powerful echo of the suffering.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-12196047903389465612010-01-22T10:15:28.914-05:002010-01-22T10:15:28.914-05:00You really captured the turmoil so well here. Wel...You really captured the turmoil so well here. Well done. The "pieces of life" line really touched me. So moving.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-57052827363753809462010-01-20T21:14:19.651-05:002010-01-20T21:14:19.651-05:00Hey WG,
You inspire me when I come here and give m...Hey WG,<br />You inspire me when I come here and give me hope. (God Bless the people of Haiti) much love:)C Willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15434009424989273556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-66882777686706092092010-01-20T21:08:03.431-05:002010-01-20T21:08:03.431-05:00.. thank u for writing this
it reads like a pray..... thank u for writing this <br /><br />it reads like a prayer ..zoya gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-26086167673596887562010-01-20T16:40:43.742-05:002010-01-20T16:40:43.742-05:00I like the echo/repeat of the last words in the fr...I like the echo/repeat of the last words in the frist few parts, it really reforce the wordslissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-43153820774778540552010-01-20T16:11:59.567-05:002010-01-20T16:11:59.567-05:00beautifully done, well crafted and political/socia...beautifully done, well crafted and political/social without being overt.Lenorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-23307808428368364202010-01-20T11:23:35.991-05:002010-01-20T11:23:35.991-05:00Powerful words my friend. I hurt for all who suffe...Powerful words my friend. I hurt for all who suffer as we ask God why. Maybe someday we will know the answers that even the Angels know not way.<br />Excellent and well written.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-64503200760434773912010-01-20T10:27:31.931-05:002010-01-20T10:27:31.931-05:00excellent write! obviously the sentiment a bit cl...excellent write! obviously the sentiment a bit close to home, right now for allKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-63487362669451640432010-01-20T10:00:19.520-05:002010-01-20T10:00:19.520-05:00As always you have found the PULSE. You have
reac...As always you have found the PULSE. You have<br />reached the heart of it. My desire is that in<br />time more sooner than later other will realize<br />your gift given to them.workervnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-33304075015437562052010-01-20T07:10:10.728-05:002010-01-20T07:10:10.728-05:00I am speechless...So well written!!I am speechless...So well written!!JStarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-8212492106500028762010-01-20T05:02:19.270-05:002010-01-20T05:02:19.270-05:00Just brilliant! Chaos explained very well here. I ...Just brilliant! Chaos explained very well here. I could feel this one. Well done!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-37746589787122548082010-01-20T00:56:31.503-05:002010-01-20T00:56:31.503-05:00This has really taken the world by storm and I fee...This has really taken the world by storm and I feel that is where others now have the opportunity to move..(a movement)- in whatever way they can to spur into action. It is astounding what one will do in a crisis though (nobody is exempt)? They really need prayer. You've done a great job and really touched on the human agony and heartbreak here.Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-81827697828901363392010-01-19T23:30:04.660-05:002010-01-19T23:30:04.660-05:00I love this - great use of theme and fantastic wor...I love this - great use of theme and fantastic word choice throughout. Brava!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-18288427746234786602010-01-19T23:05:17.929-05:002010-01-19T23:05:17.929-05:00Chaos.
(missing very last line?)
Nice poem, I like...Chaos.<br />(missing very last line?)<br />Nice poem, I like your form.<br />And it's very appropriate for the time.<br />..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-37789052418807751102010-01-19T20:37:55.734-05:002010-01-19T20:37:55.734-05:00This is just genius, i love it really do.This is just genius, i love it really do.Unbreakablehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12824009071088894792noreply@blogger.com