tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post878054779324525934..comments2023-11-05T04:14:39.426-05:00Comments on Write In Motion: A Fool's Paradise (O.S.I.)The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-34901360965410135522011-12-01T08:45:14.480-05:002011-12-01T08:45:14.480-05:00Beautiful. Makes me want to cherish my youth, even...Beautiful. Makes me want to cherish my youth, even if it is a fool's paradise. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-31593319952724065272011-11-30T21:54:41.644-05:002011-11-30T21:54:41.644-05:00This builds dramatically and moves elegantly. Grea...This builds dramatically and moves elegantly. Great job.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-92149117389071668232011-11-29T21:23:31.018-05:002011-11-29T21:23:31.018-05:00Such a thoughtful poem! There is a lot of truth in...Such a thoughtful poem! There is a lot of truth in your words that makes me glad I haven't experienced some of these in my youth though I have seen it in the lives of others. This was really good, thanks for sharing it!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-62271507695926342452011-11-28T19:59:03.803-05:002011-11-28T19:59:03.803-05:00beautiful!beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-26208223372935835032011-11-28T11:38:10.003-05:002011-11-28T11:38:10.003-05:00youth-fool's paradise, age-sanctuary from yout...youth-fool's paradise, age-sanctuary from youth .. wonderful !Kremohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12628650304437189952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-76346625038013749142011-11-28T11:05:07.414-05:002011-11-28T11:05:07.414-05:00I dunno..At 60, I'm not really feeling the san...I dunno..At 60, I'm not really feeling the sanctuary... yet. Maybe tomorrow, eh?Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2011/11/27/dream-farm-reprise/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-73470377200661001332011-11-28T07:16:39.086-05:002011-11-28T07:16:39.086-05:00A well-thought of post Write Girl, I like the dram...A well-thought of post Write Girl, I like the dramatic metamorphosis one has to go through...and you are not amiss of any phase in your words...<br /><br />Only reminds me of my youth, I did not enjoy it that much coz I grew up in a poor family working so hard to help my parents...Sad isn't it?Amityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-82396478380156834682011-11-28T05:38:08.916-05:002011-11-28T05:38:08.916-05:00Beautiful poem, I think we all have within us a pa...Beautiful poem, I think we all have within us a paradise and the nice thing is to discover and share.Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-45125077697794435202011-11-28T03:44:31.761-05:002011-11-28T03:44:31.761-05:00Great words. I often look back on my youth and thi...Great words. I often look back on my youth and think: no wonder I'm exhausted.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-79858232627016713282011-11-28T01:56:28.923-05:002011-11-28T01:56:28.923-05:00very well written poem..:)very well written poem..:)Shoaibhttp://idiotsandgenious.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5963666386756299766.post-73148574016569419832011-11-27T22:05:13.666-05:002011-11-27T22:05:13.666-05:00As I read this, images of my 17 and 19 year old fl...As I read this, images of my 17 and 19 year old flashed through my mind :) I have 2 girls, and 2 boys- to which I refer to as our "munchkins." But as I kept reading, I also saw how this applied to ME! I mean, one is as young as he/she feels :)<br />Wonderful poem- Much Love & Peace to you~Michelle My Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08559233733151655791noreply@blogger.com