Hi all,
This week's theme at O.S.I. is hollow. I am using alliteration in this piece.
Her hollow heart
Halfway
Healing
Hurting
Hiding
Hoping and
Holding her
Horrors
Heroines with halos
Hoist her
High
Helium and heat
Horizon
Heaven
Healing
Her hollow heart
13 comments:
I like your alliteration, W.G. There is more too because of the short lines, mostly three and and one worders. I use internal rhyme once in a while and also internal alliteration (if there is such a thing).
Thank you for your nice comment. I am not sure my man has to be old but I did't want him young either. More old men than young men are badly tied to drink (I think).
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Loved the alliteration and the image your poem portrayed. Thanks! Hope you are having a great week!
Hearteningly Hinteresting and hexatraordinary..
I loved your take.. nothing Hollow here.. full of wisdom and creativity..
beautiful word flow.
you rock.
How heartfelt!
What a great approach to the prompt. Lots of fun to read and the message is clear.
Here's Mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/29/indiscretion-now-obsession/
Incredible, my friend.
Nice piece..very creative- as usual!! Enjoy your evening my dear~
Very telling of a hollow heart...I have def been here
Has a Hidden message...
not a Hollow one.
A terrific piece, Write Girl, with its wonderful alliteration! One can clearly feel the pain, as well as the progress made on that journey toward healing...
So glad you stopped by my page...:)
Lynette
Imagination Lane
I love your alliteration - should join the alphabet themes.
A hollow heart holding her, giving comfort. Beautiful!
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