Hi all,
This week's theme at O.S.I. is obsession. Here is my poem:
I look for love
Between those eyes
This obsessive nature
Of mine
Won’t have me quit
Until I die
My heart consumed
I look for love
Between those eyes
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I shall try again without the typos..:) to constantly look for love reaffirmed...I love your take on obsession.
This quality of romanticism bordering on obsession keeps the romantic tradition alive!! :)
A sympathy drawing obsession, W.G! I hope your poet finds that love, from between the eyes and beyond, and soon. Love it!
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BTW, I read the last published article, written last fall but 'refreshed' last week, in the Attribute Magazine. I would liked to have been reading it while it was active.
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That is a lovely, gentle, romantic poem. What an open heart!
So sweetly written (but I like the couple of lines written twice- a bit obsessive kind of). Well done!!!
Patti
...can't wait for the day when you find it and write about it....
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