I am writing a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is feather.
Could you be ever
Lighter and follow the wind
As feathers off course
If the heavy heart
Sheds her old feathers she shall
Discover new love
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I like these a lot...I like the second especially...to shed the pain of a heavy heart to fly toward love again
that is lovely! the second haiku is very clever indeed. LS
You have offered great lessons here..these will help me..A BIG THANK YOU..
The second one holds out so much hope!
Lovely words!!
I'm following you...
Great haiku both!! The second one is stunning!!
beautiful wonders.
The Haikus are bristling with passion! Excellent piece of work.
love these
The image of the heavy heart shedding feathers no longer needed grabs me!
Featherless Pomegranate
Two great haiku. The second one is my favourite, great image of the heavy heart shedding old feathers.
quite excellent!
You are awesome with haikus! Well done. I have to pen a few myself soon.
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