Hi all,
I am writing a poem for O.S.I and this week's theme is inbox.
Pamper yourself ~ 75% off all luxury items
Contour beauty ~ 60% off cosmetics
Reveal your sultry goddess ~ 50% off all goods
Her eyes fell into the void
Of offers from an inbox
Promising her happiness
Delete key at her fingertips
Smoothing her long black hair
Her mother’s ribbon smelled of orchards
The only thing she needed to feel beautiful
8 comments:
Boy, isn't that the truth!!! Love your take on the prompt.
Love it..well done...
Beautiful poem, W.G. ~~ Mother did best.
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BTW, we both used the 'delete' key this week.
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Great take on the prompt! And very clever of her, too :-)
Best, M.
Clever take on the prompt!
Lovely tribute to the power of
love and scent.
The ribbon image is especially lovely. Thank you!
Mother knows best!
Indeed a beautiful take Write Girl "-)
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