Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Moon & Autumn (Haiku)

Hi all,

I am writing two haiku for Haiku Heights and the themes are moon and autumn.

Moon pale and vacant
I fill all my dreams in it
Light encompass me
Did you leave your mark
Recite poems on autumn days
Words resting in trees


Barbara said...

Words resting in trees!! Nice finish!

You know who said...

Filling up the vacant Moon with your dreams.
I wish I could too *sigh*

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wonderfully composed set of haiku. Thank you for sharing.

Amrit Sinha said...

A good combo of moon and autumn !!!

Mariya Koleva said...

I like the finishing lines of both haiku. Such good combination of words and so nice imagery! Thanks for sharing,
best, M.

Tigerbrite said...

Words resting in trees. Nice to think that's where they go after we have spoken them :)

Reading Pleasure said...

fine imagery

PattiKen said...

Words resting in trees - love that!

Unknown said...

Wow - this is really good! Very inspired

Anonymous said...

I think the second haiku here is very good - it asks a question I feel I should answer positively.....now I must go away and remember...and I'm glad you made me.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I can see those words cradled in the boughs of a stately old oak!

My Lady Autumn

Vinay Leo R. said...

I wonder if the words on trees are the leaves :)

Unknown said...

Beautiful. I truly like the second one.
thank you so much for sharing.