Happy Sunday all!
I've written the following poem for O.S.I. The theme this week is river.
A gift
In this river
Of tears
Falling against
My cheeks
Don’t weep
For me
I’ve watered
My garden
In a river
Of tears
Smile breaks
The mighty deep
Pure joy
Jumping in
A river
Of tears
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13 comments:
I would love to jump for joy. Beautiful poem.
Ending is such a joy!! The river flowing in the deep embrace of the mighty seas!!
A whole lot of tears here, W.G.
I love the lines,
"I’ve watered My garden In a river Of tears."
I also like the way your poem progressed from sadness to joy and also from a small stream down the cheek to enough wet to jump in.
And then there are the great minds ...
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All colors, from sadness to joy in so few lines! Excellent piece.
Beautiful and very sweet poem.
An emotional roller coaster. Excellently done.
Beautiful one Write Girl...though the river of tears is quite poignant but ended on a happy note!
Beautiful one Write Girl...though the river of tears is quite poignant but ended on a happy note!
Beautifully used
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A whole lot of tears here, W.G.
I love the lines,
"I’ve watered My garden In a river Of tears."
I also like the way your poem progressed from sadness to joy and also from a small stream down the cheek to enough wet to jump in.
And then there are the great minds ...
..
Last night this wouldn't take my comment.
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That's lovely!
tears are a memory to be enjoyed... yes, that's it...
Much emotion here. Elegantly written too.
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