Hi all,
I've written a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights using the 3-5-3 format. Hope you enjoy!!
Chasing as mirrors
Perfect sun
In your eyes
The world beams your love
Fully mine
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12 comments:
love them...shadows chasing as mirrors..good job!
and the mirrors scatter the light.i like! :)
Simply romantic and sweet.
Fully mine,, the last line is awesome.
Nice...very nice. I believe a persons eyes can say a lot.
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beautiful! I especially love the 2nd haiku! :)
Oooh! I like "chasing as mirrors." Well done my friend:)
Beautiful work Write Girl/ Well done my friend.
Melanie
The second one gives chills--the good, sweet kind.
When you see those love beams, how can you resist?
One Take on Vibrant
Hey, romantic take on vibrant..terrific my dear!
love your 3 5 3 Haikus.
awesome imagery of mirror and sunshine.
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