Hello all,
I am writing for Haiku Heights, and the theme is mask
Your smile shades your soul
Lips upturned like fragrant rose
But your eyes unmask
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16 comments:
The eyes never lie for they tell all :) Precise writing and love the metaphor in the second line. Thank you for commenting on my Haiku!
This is the essence of haiku. well done :)
Eyes just can't be masked ..well done.. and hey, thanks for your comment on my page..I don't know French..it's Claude from France who liked my haiku and gifted me translation.. I have mentioned it there.. world is full of lovely people.. RS:)
Nicely written! Thanks for your comments on my page. Yea, I have been well... just busy, that's all! But, I am back to posting... so do visit!
Beautiful observation. The eyes certainly can be revealing. A lot can be read from it.
Hank
Eyes -- the windows to the soul.
Nicely done ~~
Pink Sandpaper
Eyes never lie... the person who knows you knows how to read your eyes! Lovely...
Truth likes to travel bare feet
Live once and for all
Lovely piece of writing, thumbs up!
Eyes can never be masked....Beautiful haiku :)
Nice. The eyes are windows to reality, aren't they?
yeah, if you don't believe someone's smile, check their eyes
ugly man mask
This is awesome. Our eyes are the mirror of our soul. Nicely done.
such a lovely thought it is..well done:)
Wow. Utterly amazing. Some emotions find an outlet anyhow. Great haiku.
a great thought :) loved it!
you have a wonderful gift.
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