This week's Simply Snickers Challenge uses the words line, look, and lush. The accompanying painting is Camille Pissarro's Woman Hanging Laundry (1887).
Linens blowing against the line
Cool breezes whistling summertime
Fragrant blossoms dips in air
Lush gardens beckons unique flair
Chorus of children catching wind
Lingering on pastel skies
Mother looks upon her babe
Contently laying in the grass
Patiently awaiting mama's tickles
10 comments:
This is so very sweet. It breathes freshness, life and love.
I feel like I'm there watching this mother and child interact. Lovely poem.
Wow..you know this is so uplifting with that immage..your words are just like that- breathes freshness. Hope you've had a great weekend-
Very sweet!!! Keep writing!!!
a lovely, heartwarming poem write girl. a delightful lilt to the rhythm that gives this
poem a joyous feel.
A splendid poem, very vivid. I can almost feel the breeze blowing and smell the fresh laundry. Great piece.
WG...You always do your best work at all
times. It never seems to fail. time after time
you top your best. "Great Stuff" We are
bless to be among the first to see your
wing span.:}
So delightful. I was right there hanging clothes on the line on a beautiful summer's day with a tot at my ankle wanting to play. I do so much remember those days. . . thanks for the poetic reminder! PLL, C.
How precious are your words bringing back
such pleasant thoughts. Love and tenderness.
Loved - loved - loved reading this on a Sunday afternoon.
So rhythmic and filled with marvelous memories.
Thanks for participating at Simply Snickers. Next week's prompt is up!
Blessings,
Linda
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