Hi all,
I am writing the following poem for O.S.I. and the theme is tree. The image is from my trip to the city. It's gorgeous during the holidays.
Light
Shimmers
Sparkles new
Radiates with
Hope
Tree
Reveals
Beating heart
Captures city
Charm
Stop
Embrace
The beauty
Of holiday
Joy
11 comments:
I loved the symmetry in this poem ... the you carved a Christmas tree in your lines ... amazing !!!
I like your shape poem, W.G. It appears to have your muse fired up. Your trip to the city was well worth it. Christmas can be exciting if one has the Christmas spirit.
Too, you've got me wondering if Macy's always puts a tree astradle the clock above the door.
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Nice one. you captured the Xmas spirit perfectly here.
the forever tree...:)
I like what you've done here. Thank you.
I felt the holiday cheer! Great poem :-D
your string of diamantes surely puts one in a Christmas mood
much love...
very nice! happy holidays to you.
You captured the spirit with this poem.
Sorry for dropping in here so late..
and thanks for sharing your words on my writing...
loved the way you added the festive joy and cheers to your composition..Well done !!
Holiday mood and celebration captured here so well!
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