Sunday, December 9, 2012

Tree (O.S.I.)


 

Hi all,

I am writing the following poem for O.S.I. and the theme is tree.  The image is from my trip to the city.  It's gorgeous during the holidays.

Light
Shimmers
Sparkles new
Radiates with
Hope
 
Tree
Reveals
Beating heart
Captures city
Charm
 
Stop
Embrace
The beauty
Of holiday
Joy

11 comments:

Green Speck said...

I loved the symmetry in this poem ... the you carved a Christmas tree in your lines ... amazing !!!

Jim said...

I like your shape poem, W.G. It appears to have your muse fired up. Your trip to the city was well worth it. Christmas can be exciting if one has the Christmas spirit.

Too, you've got me wondering if Macy's always puts a tree astradle the clock above the door.
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anthonynorth said...

Nice one. you captured the Xmas spirit perfectly here.

Sandra said...

the forever tree...:)

SandyCarlson said...

I like what you've done here. Thank you.

Ben Ditty said...

I felt the holiday cheer! Great poem :-D

Gillena Cox said...

your string of diamantes surely puts one in a Christmas mood

much love...

Geraldine said...

very nice! happy holidays to you.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

You captured the spirit with this poem.

odyzz said...

Sorry for dropping in here so late..
and thanks for sharing your words on my writing...

loved the way you added the festive joy and cheers to your composition..Well done !!



Harshad Mehta said...

Holiday mood and celebration captured here so well!