Sunday, June 26, 2011

Quench (Haiku)

Hi all,

Here are a pair of haikus written for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is quench. Hope you enjoy.

Drench in water…bathe
Satisfy dry yesterdays
Joy in rivers deep

Lips quenched by the rain
Dew drops cascade as blue dreams
Wake in heaven’s stream

15 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

This is beautiful effort.. liked it.. wrapped it up well.. " Wake in Heaven's Stream"..

Leo said...

Oh, beautiful.. I liked the first one a lot. Joy in rivers deep is such a true expressions when you think that happiness is deeper in our heart than we care to look for sometimes! Nice set, WG!

mindlovemisery said...

Oh this so beautiful I love it!

Fiducia said...

Like Leo said, I too really liked the 1st one..especially coz' many places around the globe are in scarcity of this natural resource; river!! And even a drop brings happiness to this drought...Well tailored to suit the prompt and the feel! In the 2nd one, the line 'Dew drops cascade as blue dreams' caught my feel right there! Nice one...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just lovely. Both Ks's are excellent....


Melanie

Christine said...

Satisfy dry yesterdays...love this line, hard to live with unquenchable memories.

Christine said...

Gorgeous and satisfying haiku; I especially loved the first one. "Satisfy dry yesterdays" is a beautiful line.

septembermom said...

Really beautiful haikus. They are excellent!

beccagivens said...

Great set!! Well done! :-)

L'étranger 2011 said...

Very nice indeed!!
I don't know much about haiku's. im going to have to google!!

Hazel Farlough said...

Beautiful!!

C Will said...

Hey WG,
This is beautiful and you are of course insightful!! well done!:)

Jingle said...

enjoyed both Haikus.
vivid imagery.

bttrflyscar said...

beautiful!

15homegreenhome said...

satisfy dry yesterdays - love that line - vivid imagery