Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Confession (Haiku)

Hi all,

Here are a pair of haikus written for Haiku Heights. The theme is confession.

When did the love stop
Why did the heart cease to beat
Broken in pieces

Lips reveal slowly
Answer in sorrow’s slow song
Life’s cruel confession

8 comments:

Dishita said...

So true. Lovely expression

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The confession of life can be cruel, as you point out. It can also sometimes surprise us with joy.

1manview said...

Great theme, excellent Haiku's ...

mjshorts said...

Lovely Haikus - thanks for a great read.

Jennifer Jackson said...

The last one is the sadder of the two.
Such feeling in so few words.

Jingle said...

profound wonders.
well done.

septembermom said...

Love your haikus. So much put into them.

beccagivens said...

well crafted response to theme!! :-)