Saturday, May 12, 2012

Haiku (Mask)



Hello all,

I am writing for Haiku Heights, and the theme is mask

Your smile shades your soul
Lips upturned like fragrant rose
But your eyes unmask 


16 comments:

Skulls & Stone said...

The eyes never lie for they tell all :) Precise writing and love the metaphor in the second line. Thank you for commenting on my Haiku!

tigerbrite said...

This is the essence of haiku. well done :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Eyes just can't be masked ..well done.. and hey, thanks for your comment on my page..I don't know French..it's Claude from France who liked my haiku and gifted me translation.. I have mentioned it there.. world is full of lovely people.. RS:)

Opaque said...

Nicely written! Thanks for your comments on my page. Yea, I have been well... just busy, that's all! But, I am back to posting... so do visit!

kaykuala said...

Beautiful observation. The eyes certainly can be revealing. A lot can be read from it.

Hank

beccagivens said...

Eyes -- the windows to the soul.
Nicely done ~~
Pink Sandpaper

Pranita said...

Eyes never lie... the person who knows you knows how to read your eyes! Lovely...
Truth likes to travel bare feet
Live once and for all

Jaideep said...

Lovely piece of writing, thumbs up!

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Eyes can never be masked....Beautiful haiku :)

PattiKen said...

Nice. The eyes are windows to reality, aren't they?

zongrik said...

yeah, if you don't believe someone's smile, check their eyes


ugly man mask

Kristjaan Panneman said...

This is awesome. Our eyes are the mirror of our soul. Nicely done.

Invisible Silence said...

such a lovely thought it is..well done:)

Enigmatic Soul said...

Wow. Utterly amazing. Some emotions find an outlet anyhow. Great haiku.

MAHARUKH said...

a great thought :) loved it!

septembermom said...

you have a wonderful gift.