Monday, October 15, 2012

Free (O.S.I.)

Hi all,

I am writing the following poem for O.S.I. and the theme is free.

Time passes me by
I keep waiting for his call
Dipping into dreams
Long, dark corridors
Light escaping through glass
Sadness weighs on my shoulders
Like a heavy, cruel companion
As memories wilt
Into twilight
Yet a dream revives me
I have hawk eyes
And triumphant wings
That stretches out to eternity
I break free

8 comments:

Green Speck said...

Breaking free may be painful, but sometimes that's the best thing to do !!!

workerv@gmail.com said...

Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful...
The waiting can be long and weary,
but the important things you learn
sbout yourself is freeing {:

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, that breaking free! Not easy. Your poem touches my heart.

Opaque said...

It is simple, but not easy - this is what I feel from this expression.

Jim said...

Nice poem, W.G. I do hope those 'hawk eyes' keep on working for the writer. :)
And keep those wings strong!!!
..

Cynthia M. said...

Please break free of the waiting.
Piognant.

Ruchi Jain said...

:)..expressive post..and waiting long..

myheartslovesongs.com said...

LOVE the triumphant ending! wonderful take on the prompt!