I've written two haikus for this week's Haiku Heights. The theme is sacred.
Her sacred body
Prostrate at the gates of God
Behold masterpiece
Lifting eyes above
Heaven and earth pass with time
By the shores of love
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marvelous!!!
Sacred, indeed!
well put.
Hi there..deep thoughts here in this piece- great haiku! Hope your enjoying your evening-
I am speechless...
Powerful and deep; "behold masterpiece" absolutely got me ... powerful line that lives up to the sacred theme! Beautifully done.
My friend, these are beautiful. Words to fill a heart longing for home and peace. Very moving.
Melanie
Beautifully expressed double Haiku. I feel this is personal. I like how you used the word Prostrate, as in surrender.
Good one. :)
Lovely Haikus for the prompt!! :)
just superb, Write Girl! :) thanks for sharing!
Both are great, but the first one is especially powerful in its imagery.
I am speechless.. Lovely Haiku's..
--Someone Is Special--
Oh, my dear this is lovely. Wish I could fly there now.
Melanie
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