Monday, September 27, 2010

Sacred (Haiku)

Hello all,

I've written two haikus for this week's Haiku Heights. The theme is sacred.

Her sacred body
Prostrate at the gates of God
Behold masterpiece

Lifting eyes above
Heaven and earth pass with time
By the shores of love

14 comments:

magiceye said...

marvelous!!!

Opaque said...

Sacred, indeed!

Jingle said...

well put.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hi there..deep thoughts here in this piece- great haiku! Hope your enjoying your evening-

JStar said...

I am speechless...

Christine said...

Powerful and deep; "behold masterpiece" absolutely got me ... powerful line that lives up to the sacred theme! Beautifully done.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

My friend, these are beautiful. Words to fill a heart longing for home and peace. Very moving.

Melanie

Collective Epiphanies said...

Beautifully expressed double Haiku. I feel this is personal. I like how you used the word Prostrate, as in surrender.

Nanka said...

Good one. :)

Rumya said...

Lovely Haikus for the prompt!! :)

Leo said...

just superb, Write Girl! :) thanks for sharing!

Teresa said...

Both are great, but the first one is especially powerful in its imagery.

Someone Is Special said...

I am speechless.. Lovely Haiku's..

--Someone Is Special--

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh, my dear this is lovely. Wish I could fly there now.

Melanie