This poem is written for Acrostic Only.
Salt of her tears
Trickle on cold earth
Irrational thought, budding action
Light pause in space
Lay in the womb
Lay in the womb
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8 comments:
nicely done. I'd take the commas out tho, i think.
Hello Write Girl, thank you for stopping by and commenting. A beautifully penned Acrostic. There is sadness here and sometimes life seems to be at a standstill in those moments of angst. Enjoyed it :)
Irrational thought can cause pain...
Just so true..the pain is depicted so beautiful.
Nicely done.
Sad and yet beautiful.
Beautifully written.
light pause in space, how fun!
Perfectly done.. well expressed- a nice job!
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