Sunday, September 26, 2010

Still (Acrostic)

Hi bloggers,

This poem is written for Acrostic Only.

Salt of her tears
Trickle on cold earth

Irrational thought, budding action
Light pause in space
Lay in the womb

8 comments:

rdl said...

nicely done. I'd take the commas out tho, i think.

Collective Epiphanies said...

Hello Write Girl, thank you for stopping by and commenting. A beautifully penned Acrostic. There is sadness here and sometimes life seems to be at a standstill in those moments of angst. Enjoyed it :)

Opaque said...

Irrational thought can cause pain...

Scribbling Girl said...

Just so true..the pain is depicted so beautiful.
Nicely done.

Ellen said...

Sad and yet beautiful.

short poems said...

Beautifully written.

Jingle said...

light pause in space, how fun!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Perfectly done.. well expressed- a nice job!