Monday, October 25, 2010

Grace (O.S.I,)


Hi bloggers,

This poem is written for One Single Impression. The theme this week is grace. I used the poetic style triolet, though I've taken liberty on the rhyming scheme. Hope you enjoy.

Grace, the warm breath of forgiveness
Kneeling in prayer we inherit
Light and love, full and angelic
Grace, the warm breath of forgiveness
Song of spirit, friend in darkness
When the storm beats against our souls
Grace the warm breath of forgiveness
Kneeling in prayer we inherit

12 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Warm and beautiful. Reading this, I feel bathed in kindness.

Amity said...

Triolet! It's beautiful, I like your beautiful thoughts! I will try to write one like this soon!

Thanks for sharing my dear!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Wonderful...
"Grace the warm breath of forgiveness"....wow...

JStar said...

I SOOOOO needed this today...So spiritual and comforting!!!

Tammie Lee said...

this is so lovely
the spirit of the words is tangible~

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

Wow not only is this a great poem but I just took your link on Triolets. They are not an easy write! You have mastered this form nicely.

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

very comforting...and you write with such an easy grace

C Will said...

Hey WG,
This is so beautiful your writing style is smooth and soothing to my heart. Thank you!!!:)

Eye-shuh said...

So perfect. It makes me happy

septembermom said...

This made me feel nice and warm inside. Lovely read.

ms pie said...

a beautiful triolet.... born again

gabrielle said...

I too felt bathed in warmth. I love the openness of the last couplet.