Monday, October 11, 2010

Lonely (O.S.I.)

Hi all,

This week's O.S.I. prompt is lonely.

Prize of her eyes
Tears thick and blue
Washes away her hope
Soap and water soothes
Lather smooth on skin
Lonely, beating heart
Submerges her within
Bubbles wafting slowly
From her lips

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septembermom said...

Rich with imagery. Well done.

Reflections said...

Beautiful imagery. Nicely done.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey, this was nice..hope any blues will be washed away:)

JStar said...

Very nice :)

Sweetest in the Gale said...

There was such an ache in your words...I could definitely feel the loneliness. Beautifully done.

Scribbling Girl said...

there was this pain in the loneliness with lot of unspoken words.....nicely expressed....nice :)

Opaque said...

Loneliness here...

Jim said...

Lonelness to its fulfillment here, W.G. You have me wondering how fast one's heart beats when killing himself.
You soothed that beating heart of hers somewhat with the lather and a few soothing thoughts of self worth.

I like it but of course it also bothers me.
And touches me. Sadness and Loneliness go
hand in hand.

Here is hoping things are going well with and for you. :)

Patti said...

This does sound lonely...and sad too~

gabrielle said...

a beautiful piece. convex and involuted as loneliness.