Tuesday, June 21, 2011

O.S.I.: Wind


Hi all,

This poem is written for O.S.I. The theme this week is wind.

What do you seek
The surprise of sunrise
Brushing against your cheek

What do you seek
The love of another
Another heart to discover

What do you seek
A push in the wind
For happiness to break in

What do you seek

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Page One!
superb words combination, a way to finding true self realization "what we seek in this life?".. enjoy this so much.. :)

Unknown said...

...for happiness to break in... I love the image.

Jim said...

It will happen. Finding love usually and should bring happiness.
Your Father's Day post was nice. Very nice actions and thoughts from this father.
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Anonymous said...

"The surprise of sunrise
Brushing against your cheek"

I love those lines...especially in this cold winter now, I can appreciate it even more! :D

Amity said...

Everything you have said, I do seek! :)

They maybe the true friends I need!

Regina said...

This was just perfect.. has a nice quality about it! Wishing you a wonderful day tomorrow-

wena said...

oh, this poem really reaches out to me!


xoxo,
wenavee

patti said...

Such wonders we seek... My favorite is "The surprise of sunrise
Brushing against your cheek"- loved that line- Have a wonderful week!

Anonymous said...

What do you seek? Nice feel and flow! Great rhythm for the prompt! Sunrise is truly bliss when it showers your face with freshness and joys are infinite when it breaks through the wind of hope! So well woven lines TWG!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Wonderful poem for the search of love. To reach out to another. Wise words. Lovely.


Melanie

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C Will said...

Hey WG,
"A push in the wind for happiness to break in" your images are inspirational. well done!!:p

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

beautiful
keep it up.

Anonymous said...

This is very lovely. Thanks for sharing.

All the best, Boonie

septembermom said...

Love "a push in the wind."

Well done :) You're SO GOOD!

worker v said...

Beautiful! Beautiful just Beautiful.
I'm waiting for a T shirt, books or
may be a cute cap, Who KNOWZ Yes or
No:]...

Greg said...

Simple yet elegant. Nice!