Monday, July 18, 2011

Strings in Three Haikus

Hi all,

I have written three haikus for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is strings.

May I take your strings
Unravel them from each hook
Pry open your heart

Almost free of strings
Bid the world a last goodbye
A home in the sky

Down the string of love
How you swing with joy to me
Open wide my heart


Kelly said...

I love this!

Anonymous said...

Wow!! The last line in the first haiku itself caught my thoughts!! Amazing..
The second one is purely spiritual and well woven choice of words..
All of them were pure and well portrayed!

Tarang Sinha said...

Three beautiful haikus have created a lovely poem.

Anonymous said...

absolutely gorgeous! when i saw the prompt "string" i didn't think anyone would be able to write something romantic using it. you've proved me wrong. ♥ dani

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the critics said...

wonderful lovely haikus

Anonymous said...

I love your haikus they are gorgeous!

Vinati said...

Beautifully written. :)

Christine said...

love them all, that first one is perfect.

Nanka said...

Reminded me of the Kite flying festivals!! :)
The romantic incline is still there!!

Leo said...

The second one had such a deep spirituality to it, and yes, it also had a playfulness of a flying kite, like Nanka said! :) Loved all three!

Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!

Heaven said...

Like a pathway thru life...

Lovely share and nice to meet you~

septembermom said...

Haikus are always fun. They are beautifully done :)