Monday, March 5, 2012

Underground (O.S.I.)



Hi all,

Here is my poem for O.S.I. This week's theme is underground.

If these feelings escape the corridor of my soul
And race along the staircase of my bones
Pry away the keys of my heart
And leap from the window of my mouth
Words may escape that I cannot take back
Though I may hide them in the black
Between the laughter of flattering lips
May they flutter and lock themselves in darkness

9 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey, this was sharp take and so true!
Wishing you a great week-
Appreciate your thoughtfulness:)

Ramesh Sood said...

A beautifully unique take on the prompt by you..loved it.. and some good message there..

Jim said...

Okay, W.G, you write soooo beautifully. Your words turn into a romantic message seeminingly so easy and naturally. I'm envious.
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BTW, my picture is one I took in the 'Moscow (Russia) Metro.' It had art on some of the walls and statues all around.
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Shauna said...

deep as a river, this poem of yours. reminds me of the psalms.

Mara said...

How many times I have felt this way regarding words I have said and regretted.

Thanks for stopping by my blog the other day and leaving a comment. It was nice to "meet" you. :)

-Mara
http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

Mariya Koleva said...

Wow, I know that sensation. You described it so well and in such nice poetry. I love it. Thanks for writing it!
Best, M.

Sandra said...

that is fun and true...:)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I always regret the words that escape and that I can't take back...



Underground Streams

septembermom said...

"leap from the window of my mouth" great image!