Saturday, March 17, 2012

Comeback (Acrostic)

It’s been a long time since I’ve written an acrostic. This is written for Acrostic Only. Hope you enjoy!!

Cradle me once more
Open up your heart
Make this moment beautiful
Empty out your doubts
Back into these memories
Allow the blue skies
Calling one more time
Kiss and love me


Darryl Fabia said...

That was very beautiful, my friend. I didn't consider that tense of wording for it, but I like yours better than what first came to mind at "comeback".

This part especially:

Empty out your doubts
Back into these memories

That really captures the feeling of wanting someone to return; taking the good with the bad while easing their burdens. You'll handle anything to invite them in again and make things the way they were.

Excellent work.

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful acrostic!:)

septembermom said...

You are great at acrostics.