Monday, April 30, 2012

Elusive (O.S.I.)

Hi all,

I am writing this poem for O.S.I. and the theme is elusive.

Large and yet elusive
Who is your maker?
What is your mind?
Where is your heart?
So full of wonder
And full of darkness
That springs to life
Only in full light


anthonynorth said...

Beautifully done.

Leovi said...

Good poem, very nice!

Geraldine said...

Very nice, I agree!

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Pranita said...

Beautifully crafted poem!
Behind that elusive mask!

Anonymous said...

very pretty, the mystery draws me in.

Harshad mehta said...

So well put.

Jim said...

Very pretty, well done. I love shadows and how they are so mysterious in their behavior.
Sorry I'm late with returning your comment. I am out of town (London now for a bit) and have just returned from a Canary Islands cruise.

SandyCarlson said...

This is really beautiful. Well done. You have me thinking of the shadows that seem to follow me around these days.

Tracy Crenshaw said...

Beautifully written. I love the mystery to the poem, and the idea of the darkness only in full light.