I am writing two haiku for Haiku Heights and the themes are moon and autumn.
Moon pale and vacant
I fill all my dreams in it
Light encompass me
Did you leave your mark
Recite poems on autumn days
Words resting in trees
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Words resting in trees!! Nice finish!
Exquisite!
Filling up the vacant Moon with your dreams.
I wish I could too *sigh*
Wonderfully composed set of haiku. Thank you for sharing.
A good combo of moon and autumn !!!
I like the finishing lines of both haiku. Such good combination of words and so nice imagery! Thanks for sharing,
best, M.
Words resting in trees. Nice to think that's where they go after we have spoken them :)
fine imagery
Words resting in trees - love that!
Wow - this is really good! Very inspired
I think the second haiku here is very good - it asks a question I feel I should answer positively.....now I must go away and remember...and I'm glad you made me.
I can see those words cradled in the boughs of a stately old oak!
My Lady Autumn
I wonder if the words on trees are the leaves :)
Beautiful. I truly like the second one.
thank you so much for sharing.
hugs
shakira
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