Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Fingerprint (Haiku)


Dogs on a man hunt
Sweat at midnight falling thick
The gun has his prints

Trigger happy fool
Because her love has stained you
Erasing her print

Written for Haiku Heights

7 comments:

Kalpana Solsi said...

nice Haiku.:)

Porcelain Lotus said...

Very nice.

foam said...

Oh wow! These pack a punch!

mindlovemisery said...

I love them both!!! Brilliant =)

Reshma said...

fear and love leave indelible prints, lovely take :)

Nanka said...

Short haiku story with love romance revenge and murder mystery!! Well done!!

LaTonya Baldwin said...

social commentary, always welcome. Can we stop the violence against women?