Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Fingerprint (Haiku)

Dogs on a man hunt
Sweat at midnight falling thick
The gun has his prints

Trigger happy fool
Because her love has stained you
Erasing her print

Written for Haiku Heights


Kalpana Solsi said...

nice Haiku.:)

Porcelain Lotus said...

Very nice.

foam said...

Oh wow! These pack a punch!

Anonymous said...

I love them both!!! Brilliant =)

Reshma said...

fear and love leave indelible prints, lovely take :)

Nanka said...

Short haiku story with love romance revenge and murder mystery!! Well done!!

LaTonya Baldwin said...

social commentary, always welcome. Can we stop the violence against women?