Saturday, July 13, 2013

Swing (Haiku)

Hi bloggers,

I am writing a pair of haiku for Haiku Heights.  The theme is swing.

Delicate sing-song
Braids swing in summer's light free
Like a gentle poem

Carefree girl
Hallelujah love
Soaring home

8 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Write Girl...Second one blew me away...beautiful haiku that...and thanks for your constant inspiration...

RS

mindlovemisery said...

How beautiful these are!

Stephen Mumble said...

Well done - second haiku is simply superb!

Reshma said...

Wonderfully crafted :) When we were in school, we used to neatly oil and braid our hair, alas they swing no more that way...

McGuffy Ann said...

Very nicely done!

kaykuala said...

Those carefree days of childhood! Great to relive them again! Nicely!

Hank

Gillena Cox said...

wonderful!wonderful! the mood is lucid and endearing

much love...

Amrit Sinha said...

Loved it :-)