This week's O.S.I's theme is Descent. This word conjured up a daring adventure and inspired me to write this piece.
Long, winding
Adventures
Calls curious hearts
Dashing
Daringly
Down the
Descent
Staircase winding
Shadows gliding
In hats and halos
Hearts writhing
In rib cages
As distant
Dreams
Drift
Downstream
Fearless souls
Brave the descent
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"Hearts writhing
In rib cages
As distant
Dreams
Drift
Downstream"
Some choice words..but dreams and braving the descent are in this mix as well. I like it.
Ya..you did notice my son on the horse at the bottom right? He went back to Illinois to visit his Grandma and an Aunt he never met personally. Anyway..the horse with Putin and him riding in the same direction were too classic and the perfect tease!
reminds me of halloweeen, though thats still some time away i guess!!
well written, a very good read!
Excellent movement and rhythm in this poem!
Peace,
JP/deb
I agree with JanePoet! Keep up the good work!
I feel adventurous as I read your lines. Wonderful!
awesome write:)...keep it up:)
Write Girl - I don't remember a poem that you have ever written that I have not thought was beautiful. This one is powerful.
Shadows gliding
In hats and halos
&
Hearts writhing
In rib cages
wonderful images ..
many thanks for sharing this ..
Hey WG,
Your poem makes me feel inspired you have such a soothing writing style you write like a beautiful picture!!:o
hey write girl, awesome surreal quality to
this poem. reminds me of beginning a new
scary relationship.
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