Saturday, October 24, 2009

Spiritual Beauty

Eyelids deep with wisdom
Lashes dipped in prayer
Lips caressing agape love
Hair adorned in God's glory

Lashes dipped in prayer
Joy is the rouge of her cheeks
Hair adorned in God's glory
Words lingering like the breeze

Joy is the rouge of her cheeks
Honor and praise ripen in breath
Words lingering like the breeze
Eyes exude a heavenly depth

Honor and praise ripen in breath
Life is the nectar of her blood
Eyes exude a heavenly depth
Daily her God blesses her soul

Life is the nectar of her blood
Peace is her adorning raiment
Daily her God blesses her soul
Her feet glistens in the road of faith

Peace is her adorning raiment
Body swimming in virtue's river
Her feet glistens in the road of faith
Prayer is her midnight companion

Body swimming in virtue's river
Glory bathes her like the sun
Prayer is her midnight's companion
Visions quicken her legs to run
She is a spiritual beauty

11 comments:

PS : De-abbreviate as you like ;) said...

really a beauty this verses :)

Kilauea Poetry said...

This was pretty..what gave you the inspiration? Powerful, meaningful lines- How are you doing? Hope you have a nice Sunday-

Saadi said...

'Lashes dipped in prayers'....tht's a realyl powerful line!!!

Great going, Write Girl!!

septembermom said...

I'm in awe. Wonderfully done, my dear poet.

JP/deb said...

what a rich feast for the senses ...

lovely!

JP/deb

Yellow Tulip said...

lovely style:)...wats this called?...

C Will said...

Hey WG,
What can I say you are the master at what you do. Your writing causings me to soar with delight!! take a bow :) You are the real deal!!

Unbreakable said...

If i could i would write a poem about how much i admire "writing in motion" writing style,of how wonderfully blessed she is with the use of words.

Keep at it.

Jenners said...

I like some of the imagery you used here ... like "lashes dipped in prayer." And I like the repeating of certain phrases and how it kind of looped around and came back to itself. Good job!

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

This is the most beautiful experiment of verses I have ever seen. Soulful and powerful.

swapnap said...

The prayer just grows on to you as you reach the end..fleet glistens in the road of faith..such a nice thought. Infact all the lines are..wonderful write. Enjoyed the spiritual beauty.