This week's Simply Snicker's Challenge uses the words vain (or vane), veil (or vail), and very.
I chose a very unique and creative poetic style called Nonet. This poetic form consists of 9 Lines (9 syllables) which gradually taper off to one syllable. If you are interested, please give it a go!! Hope you enjoy. The accompany portrait is A Young Woman and Her Little Boy by Agnolo Bronzino.
Portrait of a lady's decadence
Veil secrets masked in opulence
Young lad tucked in vain display
Peeking from her red dress
Trim and frills brighten
A very lost
Unhappy
Quiet
Soul
6 comments:
Superb! I have taken instant liking to this style dear and shall attempt for sure. Well done.
WG, this was wonderful! :)
lovely nonet! its really a very nice form!
if i could make a suggestion, nonets look even more attractive if centre aligned. :)
I like the portrait and the deep red color. This was a fantastic choice of words- really nice job! I may try this!
Well done! Came over to check you out and much
to my surprise this lovely work. Your portrait
and insight stired my imagination. Makes one
look beyond, intering into that quite place where words unspoken speak.
Great job! I want to try this form. Love the painting. This can be a powerful poetic form.
this was so well said .. described the portrait to the core ! and the style.. well.. i just gotta use it soon :)
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