Tuesday, April 13, 2010

O.S.I.: Vicarious

Hi bloggers,

This week's O.S.I. prompt is vicarious.

Freedom from gravity
Height redefined
Enraptured with flight
A dot along the skyline
Tight roping between buildings
Space walking on earth's ceiling
In orbit, rounding the sun
Her imagination whirled and spun
Testing waters didn't jive
She'd take a dive and live vicarious

9 comments:

Nadege said...

hey pretty write girl this poem of yours
makes me want to soar into the sky and pluck
out a couple of hundred stars.

luv your imagination.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Really really smooth- nice job..I like this a lot Katina! I agree with the poster above!

Amity said...

what a way to go vicarious...:)

i love free-verse writing too, but i get the high of trying sonnets and villanelle, too..quite challenging!

thanks for your visit in my place!

JStar said...

This poem made me feel like I was free falling with trust that everything is going to be ok...Love it :)

Brosreview said...

I needed this today!

Jim said...

Did you ever want to do something that you couldn't sooooo badly? I hope that dive doesn't harm your poet.

I can think of dive as in doing something to enhance the senses or a deep, deep, dive from which there is no coming up.
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C Will said...

Hey WG,
What I love most about your poems you take the roof off the house!! fantastic!!!:p well done

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Nadege said...

freedom from gravity - great phrase.
this poem makes one want to soar into
uncharted waters - you write with such
momentum, pretty girl