Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Haiku (Struggle)

Hi bloggers,

I've written two Haiku's for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is struggle.


Knee deep in my fears
With the sun setting below
My heart trembles dear…..

Arise in my night
Swept in time’s forgiving love
Spirit full and free

12 comments:

magiceye said...

love the 2nd haiku the best!

Real Me said...

"Time's forgiving love" - beautiful!

Saras said...

Exquisite Haiku! Beautifully done.

JStar said...

Eventho the fears try to consume...This is so positive and uplifting on the second stanza...

septembermom said...

Love the power within these few lines.

Kilauea Poetry said...

This was sharp and very uplifting!
Hey, thanks for your sweet comments..hope you have a great evening-

Jingle said...

divine!

Jingle said...

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three awards for you.
help us visit 4 friends who have been celebrating birthdays ..

Nimue said...

beautiful done :)

Nadege said...

both haiku are thoughtful and layered -
well done.

Leo said...

even I loved the second one the best, TWG :) lovely words..!

Vee... said...

Beautiful lines there. Great job.