I've written two Haiku's for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is struggle.
Knee deep in my fears
With the sun setting below
My heart trembles dear…..
Arise in my night
Swept in time’s forgiving love
Spirit full and free
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11 comments:
love the 2nd haiku the best!
"Time's forgiving love" - beautiful!
Exquisite Haiku! Beautifully done.
Eventho the fears try to consume...This is so positive and uplifting on the second stanza...
Love the power within these few lines.
This was sharp and very uplifting!
Hey, thanks for your sweet comments..hope you have a great evening-
divine!
beautiful done :)
both haiku are thoughtful and layered -
well done.
even I loved the second one the best, TWG :) lovely words..!
Beautiful lines there. Great job.
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