Monday, August 30, 2010

Three Lanturnes

Hi bloggers,

I constructed a poem in the Japanese style lanturne.

Hark
The light
Blows yonder
Spinning yellow
Love…

While
The wind
Beseeches
Night sweeping my
Eyes…

Dim
Candles
Blow them out
Smiling moon is
Sweet

6 comments:

Nalini Hebbar said...

Sweet!...The Moon can be magical...let not the candle spoil the fun!

Kilauea Poetry said...

This one is extra special- enjoyed your three lanterns! Can you believe Fall is just around the corner?! Well I hope you have a cozy evening- keep up the good work-(very inspirational)!

septembermom said...

Gorgeous. The imagery stays with me. I love how you work in the haiku form. You're such a talent!!

Opaque said...

The moon is inspirational and magical!

JStar said...

This is so nice....You have so much talent within you!

Nadege said...

Very gentle and tender, miss.