Monday, August 23, 2010

Pensive (O.S.I.)

Hi bloggers,

This poem is posted for O.S.I.


Thoughts are like blue drops
Sweet and resolute before the great rain
Precipitous fall of silver
A flash of light laughs upon the face
Pensive gaze beams like a rainbow
Upon the mind’s landscape

15 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Fabulous!! Honestly- a really nice job Katina.. wow!

irene said...

Some sweet images here..:)

Opaque said...

Thoughts are indeed sweet and resolute...

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JStar said...

And the minds landscape brings many options...Its an ocean of deep thoughts...

septembermom said...

This is one of my favorites. Love all the word imagery that so easily comes out of you. We're all lucky to read your work here. Thank you.

Ramesh Sood said...

Rainbow on minds landscape.. how colourful.. still we attract dark clouds.. Very beautiful..Right Girl..

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Gyanban © said...

Wonderful choice of words..quite liked it.!

SandyCarlson said...

A beautiful, soft rain. Thanks.

twitches said...

Like it all, but especially those first two lines!

moe lauher said...

i'm always pensive as i sit and watch the skies for the "great rain." Thanks for sharing

Jim said...

Hi WG ~~ This is a nice mixture of colors. The pensive, worrisome, gaze is the mot colorful of all. I like it!
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ladynimue said...

loved your "thoughts" a lot !!!

Tumblewords: said...

How lovely - the rain brings such softness and pensive thought!

Eye-shuh said...

This little piece is perfect.