Sunday, December 26, 2010

Comb (O.S.I)

Hi all,

This poem is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is comb. The winter storm has inspired my latest work.

She combs the snow
From her hair
Lets it shake
In soft mounds
Of white
Chilly frost
Against her ears
Jack Frost’s
Lovely breath

Pours a cup
Of hot chocolate
Lips puckered
Inhaling cocoa
Soothing steps
A liquid bath
Seductive splash
Chocolate dash

13 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

The image of a chocolate dash is very beautiful. I enjoyed this poem. I think I lived it while I read it.

Louis la Vache said...

Resistance to Chocolate is Futile!

;-D

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Luscious words...I could taste that hot chocolate!

Jim said...

Very nicely written. First the big freezing chill, then the delicious thaw.
I too lived it while I read. I love chocolate!
..

Gaurang Rao said...

You made me want some chocolate

Sallie (FullTime-Life) said...

Lovely images! And good for you to let the storm inspire you. (I'd be cuddling under a blanket, not thinking very much I'm afraid!) Stay warm. Drink hot chocolate.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Great imagination..
and very well written...

"Pours a cup Of hot chocolate
Lips puckered Inhaling cocoa
Soothing steps A liquid bath
Seductive splash Chocolate dash"

Amazing.. :)

Ian said...

Vous passez un bon fétes de fin d'année.

Nanka said...

Yummy!! The sweetest poem on a cold and frosty day.

Rumya said...

Hot chocolate and winter go hand in hand!!
Lovely poem Write Girl :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Write Girl.. it is indeed right to pour a cup of hot chocolate.. indeed so very soothing in the chill.. well written, this!

Autumn Belle @ KDP said...

Nothing beats a cup of hot chocolate in a cold wintry day.

ρομπερτ said...

A joy for the senses !

Please have a wonderful Wednesday.

daily athens