Hi all,
This poem is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is comb. The winter storm has inspired my latest work.
She combs the snow
From her hair
Lets it shake
In soft mounds
Of white
Chilly frost
Against her ears
Jack Frost’s
Lovely breath
From her hair
Lets it shake
In soft mounds
Of white
Chilly frost
Against her ears
Jack Frost’s
Lovely breath
Pours a cup
Of hot chocolate
Lips puckered
Inhaling cocoa
Soothing steps
A liquid bath
Seductive splash
Chocolate dash
Of hot chocolate
Lips puckered
Inhaling cocoa
Soothing steps
A liquid bath
Seductive splash
Chocolate dash
13 comments:
The image of a chocolate dash is very beautiful. I enjoyed this poem. I think I lived it while I read it.
Resistance to Chocolate is Futile!
;-D
Luscious words...I could taste that hot chocolate!
Very nicely written. First the big freezing chill, then the delicious thaw.
I too lived it while I read. I love chocolate!
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You made me want some chocolate
Lovely images! And good for you to let the storm inspire you. (I'd be cuddling under a blanket, not thinking very much I'm afraid!) Stay warm. Drink hot chocolate.
Great imagination..
and very well written...
"Pours a cup Of hot chocolate
Lips puckered Inhaling cocoa
Soothing steps A liquid bath
Seductive splash Chocolate dash"
Amazing.. :)
Vous passez un bon fétes de fin d'année.
Yummy!! The sweetest poem on a cold and frosty day.
Hot chocolate and winter go hand in hand!!
Lovely poem Write Girl :)
Write Girl.. it is indeed right to pour a cup of hot chocolate.. indeed so very soothing in the chill.. well written, this!
Nothing beats a cup of hot chocolate in a cold wintry day.
A joy for the senses !
Please have a wonderful Wednesday.
daily athens
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