Tuesday, December 14, 2010

Win (O.S.I.)

Hi all,
I've written this poem for O.S.I. This week's prompt is win.

Rocks and edges
They won’t last
At journeys end
A distant past
The future yearns
New Eden calls
Brave the storm
No deed is small
Courage to begin
Created to win


6 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

I really enjoyed this piece- excellent! It was so optimistic too..if we could just remember that "no deed is small" in the whole scheme of things! I lose sight of that! Thanks!

JStar said...

This is very powerful...So much said in such few words

BTW...Yea, that poem yesterday was based on something at work...that happened yesterday :) It was nice...Really nice...Too bad 1 only have one more day left at this job lol...Starting my new one monday...

septembermom said...

Very inspirational. Love this piece.

Sumit Sarkar said...

really powerful and very inspiring... :)

Geraldine said...

I hope 2011 is a winning year for you too! Courage to begin, we all need that.

http://veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com/2010/12/16/mr-cheddar-wishes-you-a-cool-yule/

Jingle said...

courage to begin,
created to win...

what a divine ending..
well done.