Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Incandescent (O.S.I.)

Hi all,
I am posting this for O.S.I. and the theme is incandescent. I used the poetic form etheree.

With fervor
Rays of tangerine
Sweet summers in the sky
Dripping light caresses arms
Waves iridescent shimmer bright
Ponder universe between our eyes
The world in our fingertips full of light


SandyCarlson said...

Your poem is a beautiful embrace.

Gyanban said...

Intelligently done.The imagery is beautiful.

Tammie said...

this is beautiful
and full of the spirit of brilliant light

zoya gautam said...

full of the spirit of brilliant light

oh yes !

best wishes ..

Patti said...

What a beautiful verse! Just what I needed on a gloomy winter's day- a splash of sunlight! Also- loved the poetry form- I have never heard of it and enjoyed learning something new!

Opaque said...

Rays of tangerine indeed... I have some photos similar to this... I think I should start contributing... how have you been?!

Jim said...

WG, you are soooooo clever! And such a lovely poem full of feelings alluding to the natural sunlight.

I am not participating this week because I am one the road. I might write from here for next week. I had thoughts for this time; if I had I planned to use an internal rhyme also using the word iridescent.

I looked at http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/etheree.html. They sound like fun to do. I may try them sometime.

Anonymous said...

Sorry this is coming a bit late... Reading this was like drinking a cup of sunshine! I feel shimmery and light... Beautiful work!

septembermom said...

Love the layout and imagery. You're very gifted, my friend :)

Sumit Sarkar said...

"The world in our fingertips full of light"...this is so good... :)