Monday, February 21, 2011

O.S.I: Top


Hi all,

This week's prompt at O.S.I. is top. I used the unique and beautiful images from stockarch because it conveyed lively, beautiful art.

Graceful legs
Spinning top
Rapturous bend
Dancing silhouette
Glint of sunlight
Raised fingertips
Consenting wrists
Down the arms
Round her shoulders
Elegant torso
Circular hips
Mesmerizing legs
Endless whirl
Spinning, continuous top


15 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, to be that. Beautiful poem.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Beautiful words...love your work :)

Aayushi Mehta said...

This applies to ballet dancer taking a swirl as well. That's the image it brought to me mind. Lovely writing :)

thelittlewriterthatcould said...

My heart sighed with the line, "Consenting wrists" Wow... I was swaying in rhythm to each line! Unique take on the prompt. Loved it.

Geraldine said...

Oh so wonderful! I love the image and your whirling words!!!

Kilauea Poetry said...

This image you chose is terrific for your take on this prompt- great lines:)

sandra said...

nice image and great imagination...!!

C Will said...

Hey WG,
Wow... the lines are beautiful and you are exceptionally terrific at this!! Loved it!!:)

worker v said...

Great! Just dazzling, i could envision the movements. Each line sent my imagination
in the center of its gravity:}

Jim said...

I love to watch the skaters doing the 'whirl.'
You did really good here. :) I could see them by reading every line as soon as I figured what it was, probably with Dancing silhouette.
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Jenners said...

Who knew you could make "tops" sensual and sexy ... but you did!

Mariya Koleva said...

It's so vivid! I love this poem; can almost see the figure!

ms pie said...

a woman's body is a precious sight...

Patti said...

Love that! I got caught up in the spinning words...and the picture is beautiful!

septembermom said...

You know that I like this one - dance, sensual imagery and movement. Wow!