Monday, April 18, 2011

Shackles (O.S.I.)



Hi all,

Here is my poem for O.S.I and the theme is shackles.

Shackles can come undone
If your mind let’s the world
Flow freely and speak freely
Uncage the mind of reason
Be open in every season
Receiving and giving as the sea
With window eyes to spot the key
That may release your inner being
Shackles can come undone

9 comments:

PremI said...

Nice and right way to say it..
yes,shackles can come undone

Sparkling Gem said...

wow so appropriate...the kind of poem which makes u all rise up....loved it :)

Scribbling Gal

ladynimue said...

well said in lovely lines :)

Patti said...

"Shackles can come undone
If your mind let’s the world
Flow freely and speak freely"...if we would only always remember that- beautiful~

Ramesh Sood said...

Indeed shackles can come undone..very true.. you have done very nice with the prompt.. I enjoyed the simplicity..wow!! :) RS...

C Will said...

Hey WG,
You took one word and bridged the divide between all people - there is no more to say!!!

sandra said...

that is positive!

Jim said...

Well done, WG! :)
I like to think my shackle are undone. Still even now when I have no pickup truck or motorcycle.
How about yours?
..
We don't count Mrs. Jim.
..

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nicely said my friend......


Melanie